Atlas / Plate 01

Plate 01 · from English · Flagship · Owner’s reading

Gravity’s Rainbow

The nouns can cross. The genitive is a different machine, and on the owner’s reading that machine was already about the book.

Thomas Pynchon, Gravity’s Rainbow (Viking, 1973).

Where the line breaks

Alignment of Gravity’s Rainbow into 5 lanes. Arrives, thins, and breaks are written in each cell. The same information is in the text alternative below.
ENParts
GravityPossessor noun
’sGenitive determiner
RainbowHead noun
ENSourceGravity’s Rainbow
GravitySource
’sSource
RainbowSource
JA Japanese Published translation 重力の虹
重力 Thins Connotation
の Breaks Mechanism mismatch
虹 Arrives

Published translation. Title of both published Japanese translations: Kokusho Kankōkai, 1993, translated by 越川芳明, 佐伯泰樹, 植野達郎, and 幡山秀明; and Satō Yoshiaki (佐藤良明) for Shinchōsha, 2014. Surface order matches English: possessor, then linker, then head. The order is not the break. The linker is.

DE German Published translation Die Enden der Parabel
— Breaks Sound or wordplay
der Breaks Mechanism mismatch
Parabel Breaks Sound or wordplay

Published translation. Elfriede Jelinek and Thomas Piltz, Rowohlt, 1981. Jelinek has said Pynchon accepted the title. Parabel is her figure, not a calque. The German title refuses the possessive figure and builds a pun the English title does not make.

FR French Published translation L’Arc-en-ciel de la gravité
gravité Arrives
de Breaks Mechanism mismatch
arc-en-ciel Arrives

Published translation. Michel Doury’s title. An earlier, incomplete French edition (Plon, 1975) was published simply as Rainbow. Surface order reverses: the head noun comes first. Gravity is no longer the word raised to the front.

ES Spanish Published translation El arco iris de gravedad
gravedad Thins Connotation
de Breaks Mechanism mismatch
arco iris Arrives

Published translation. Antoni Pigrau, Grijalbo (Barcelona, 1978). Head-first order, as in French. The possessor is not in front.

ZH Chinese Published translation 万有引力之虹
万有引力 Thins Register
之 Breaks Mechanism mismatch
虹 Arrives

Published translation. 张文宇, Yilin Press, 2008. Order matches English and Japanese: possessor, linker, head. Register and mechanism are what change.

Text alternative

Japanese “重力の虹” (published translation): breaks: mechanism mismatch. German “Die Enden der Parabel” (published translation): breaks: sound or wordplay. French “L’Arc-en-ciel de la gravité” (published translation): breaks: mechanism mismatch. Spanish “El arco iris de gravedad” (published translation): breaks: mechanism mismatch. Chinese “万有引力之虹” (published translation): breaks: mechanism mismatch.

Gravity Possessor noun

The possessor. English gravity names the physical pull and, as a separate sense, seriousness. In the determiner-phrase account, this noun is raised into the specifier of the genitive determiner.

What happens to “Gravity” in each lane
LaneFormStatusBreakWhat happens
Japanese 重力 Thins Connotation 重力 names the physical pull. It does not also mean seriousness, which English gravity can.
German — Breaks Sound or wordplay Gravity is not named. The title starts from the two ends of an arc.
French gravité Arrives — gravité keeps both the physical sense and the seriousness sense. French arc-en-ciel already contains arc. That the rocket’s arc is hiding in the word for rainbow is a fact about the lexicon, not a claim about the translator’s intention.
Spanish gravedad Thins Connotation gravedad, like gravity, can mean seriousness. The published title has no article: de gravedad is also an ordinary collocation for “serious.” Whether readers actually take the title that way is not established.
Chinese 万有引力 Thins Register 万有引力 is the physics term, universal gravitation, not the everyday word. The seriousness sense of gravity is not in it.

’s Genitive determiner

A genitive in determiner position. In the analysis associated with Abney (1987), ’s heads the determiner phrase and the possessor sits in its specifier. The owner treats that placement as syntactic raising plus possessor-in-specifier: the possessor is lifted into the slot before ’s.

What happens to “’s” in each lane
LaneFormStatusBreakWhat happens
Japanese の Breaks Mechanism mismatch の is an adnominal particle between a modifier and a head noun. It is not a determiner, and it does not put the possessor in a specifier by English-style raising.
German der Breaks Mechanism mismatch der in die Enden der Parabel is an ordinary genitive article inside a different noun phrase, not a determiner clitic with a raised possessor.
French de Breaks Mechanism mismatch de is a preposition. The relation is a prepositional genitive, head first, not a determiner with a possessor in its specifier.
Spanish de Breaks Mechanism mismatch de is a preposition, and there is no determiner-genitive.
Chinese 之 Breaks Mechanism mismatch 之 is the classical adnominal linker, kin to modern 的. It joins modifier to noun. It is not a determiner clitic, and there is no possessor-in-specifier raising.

Rainbow Head noun

The possessed noun, the arc. It stays inside the phrase as the head, under the determiner. It is also the book’s image for the rocket’s path.

What happens to “Rainbow” in each lane
LaneFormStatusBreakWhat happens
Japanese 虹 Arrives — The rainbow noun arrives.
German Parabel Breaks Sound or wordplay Parabel replaces the rainbow. The word means both parabola and parable.
French arc-en-ciel Arrives — The rainbow arrives, as a compound that literally says arc-in-sky.
Spanish arco iris Arrives — The rainbow arrives, as two words.
Chinese 虹 Arrives — The rainbow character arrives.

The joint

This plate is the owner’s reading of a title. The grammar it stands on is marked separately from the literary claim.

In English the title is a possessive. On the account associated with Steven P. Abney’s dissertation The English Noun Phrase in Its Sentential Aspect (MIT, 1987), the Saxon genitive is not a case ending glued to the possessor. ’s is a genitive in determiner position: the head of a determiner phrase, with the possessor in its specifier. The usual generative development of that account is raising. The possessor moves up into that specifier. The owner’s name for the whole machine is syntactic raising and possessor-in-specifier. The shape is Gravity, lifted in front of ’s, and Rainbow still the head noun underneath.

Japanese calls the book 重力の虹. 重力 is gravity as physical pull. 虹 is the rainbow. They carry. の does the linking, and it does it by another mechanism. It is an adnominal particle between a modifier and a following noun. Linguists have also described this の as genitive case. Neither description is the English one. Japanese does not place this relation in a determiner head, and it does not raise a possessor into a determiner’s specifier. The possession is said. The machine that said it in English is not in the line.

That would be ordinary packaging, except for what the owner does with it. The novel thematizes raising in the physical sense: rockets rising, the parabola of the flight, the raised and the fallen. The owner reads the English title as already taking part, because its grammar raises the possessor. A reader of 重力の虹 is not barred from the rockets, the arc, or the possession. What does not come with the title, on this reading, is the echo between a syntactic raising and a rocket’s rising. The title cannot be carried over perfectly, because that echo was in the joint. The loss is small, and the owner holds that it matters to a reader’s understanding of the book. This is an interpretation of literary effect. It is not a claim that Japanese cannot speak of ascent, and it is not a verdict on either translation.

The other lanes chose other crates. French puts the rainbow first and links it with de. Spanish does the same, and the articleless de gravedad sits where Spanish also says that a wound is serious. German does not translate the possessive at all: Die Enden der Parabel names the two ends of a parabola, and Parabel is also the word for a parable. Chinese uses the classical linker 之 and replaces the everyday word with 万有引力, the technical name of universal gravitation.

Why this break matters to a reader

A reader who thinks a title is only a label can shrug. A reader who thinks this title is one of the places the book states its subject will feel 重力の虹 as a repacking: same picture, different joint. The map’s point is the joint. Crossing remains possible. The German title keeps the parabola by a route the English title never took. Difference, not a ban.