Atlas / Plate 05

Plate 05 · from French

Aujourd’hui, maman est morte

maman is a child’s word. “Mother” cools it. The passé composé cools again when English puts the death in the simple past.

Albert Camus, L’Étranger (Gallimard, 1942).

Where the line breaks

Alignment of Aujourd’hui, maman est morte into 2 lanes. Arrives, thins, and breaks are written in each cell. The same information is in the text alternative below.
FRParts
Aujourd’huiFronted time
mamanIntimate kin term
est mortePassé composé
FRSourceAujourd’hui, maman est morte
Aujourd’huiSource
mamanSource
est morteSource
EN English Published translation Mother died today
today Thins Mechanism mismatch
Mother Breaks Register
died Thins Mechanism mismatch

Published translation. Stuart Gilbert, 1946. The English title in his wake was often The Stranger, and in Britain The Outsider.

EN English Published translation Maman died today
today Thins Mechanism mismatch
Maman Arrives
died Thins Mechanism mismatch

Published translation. Matthew Ward, 1988. He keeps the French word. Sandra Smith’s later translation uses “My mother died today,” and titles the book The Outsider.

Text alternative

English “Mother died today” (published translation): breaks: register. English “Maman died today” (published translation): thins: mechanism mismatch.

Aujourd’hui Fronted time

“Today” is the first word. The sentence opens on the present day, then names the death.

What happens to “Aujourd’hui” in each lane
LaneFormStatusBreakWhat happens
English today Thins Mechanism mismatch “Today” is moved to the end. The sentence now opens on the mother, not the day.
English today Thins Mechanism mismatch Still moved off the front of the sentence.

maman Intimate kin term

A child’s word for mother, warm and spoken. Not the legal mère, which the telegram inside the same paragraph uses.

What happens to “maman” in each lane
LaneFormStatusBreakWhat happens
English Mother Breaks Register “Mother” is formal and cold against maman. The telegram’s mère is a different word in the French, and this translation spends “Mother” here.
English Maman Arrives — Kept, because “mom” and “mummy” would be the wrong English childhood. Keeping the French word carries the register by refusing to translate it. A reader who does not know maman still has to learn the temperature.

est morte Passé composé

The compound past of speech, not the literary passé simple. The death is reported in the tense of a voice talking now.

What happens to “est morte” in each lane
LaneFormStatusBreakWhat happens
English died Thins Mechanism mismatch English simple past. The spoken compound tense is flattened.
English died Thins Mechanism mismatch The simple past remains. Ward repairs the noun and not the tense.

The joint

The novel’s first three words put the day before the death, and the death in a child’s noun. Maman is not mère. A few lines later the telegram says Mère décédée, and the cold form is the institution’s. Meursault’s own word is the warm one. Readers who find him heartless are often responding to a translation that has already chilled the noun.

Gilbert’s “Mother died today” does that chilling, and it also rearranges the sentence so the mother comes first. Ward’s “Maman died today” gives the noun back and still uses the English narrative past. Smith’s “My mother” is a third compromise, intimate by the possessive, ordinary by the noun. None of these is the passé composé, the tense of someone speaking.

The title is a related, smaller break, noted here rather than drawn as a lane. Étranger covers stranger, foreigner, and outsider. English has had to pick. Gilbert’s British title was The Outsider; American editions of that era used The Stranger; Smith uses The Outsider again and says the one English word has to stand for all three.

Why this break matters to a reader

The first sentence is the evidence the court, and the reader, will use against him. If “Mother” has already made him formal, the flatness of the narration reads as coldness. If “maman” is allowed to be affectionate, the flatness reads as something else: a man speaking simply, in the tense of speech, about a death that is today or maybe yesterday. The case begins in that temperature.